thesis statement: the scene from my house to school was a beautiful picture.
paragraph
topic sentence: the picture was really lovely amnd lively in the morning
the sun was rising
the blocks of willows were against the river
the cool wind currents
the pure water currents
cut aacross the vast field
daisy: yellow, white
stopped and rested under a big tree
birds were siging on the branhes
butter flies: yellow, white, colourful
bees were winding to look for honey
the sunlights were shning through the branches
the red gravel road had trees along
my shoes were all in red
the sun rose higher and I came to shool
conclusion
I love my school time. those days were wonderful and meaningful for me for there birds,butterflies and flowers. whenever I think it I feel very gleeful. Time and again I wish I could go to school again.
30 thg 10, 2009
23 thg 10, 2009
In Viet Nam, there are a lot of beautyful and famous places for tourist to visit like Da Lat, Ha Long Bay, Ha Tien, Vung Tau, etc...Most of them often get there on their holiday. They want to relax or release stress. However, returning to my hometown on my holidays is the most meaning thing for me.
First, coming back the hometown always makes me really happy. I meet every member in my family again. They usually welcome me with the smiles on their lips in a gleeful manner. The smiles do away with the tense feelings on me after my long journeys. We tell humorous stories for hours to one another for we are the persons fond of humor. I with my family enjoy the delicious meals that are made by my mother. The meals are very simple , but good and full of the love . I am able to eat my favorite chicken soup by my grandmother. Besides, I also have a good occasion to visit my old friends who went to school with me. We remind our school time memories and play game together.
First, coming back the hometown always makes me really happy. I meet every member in my family again. They usually welcome me with the smiles on their lips in a gleeful manner. The smiles do away with the tense feelings on me after my long journeys. We tell humorous stories for hours to one another for we are the persons fond of humor. I with my family enjoy the delicious meals that are made by my mother. The meals are very simple , but good and full of the love . I am able to eat my favorite chicken soup by my grandmother. Besides, I also have a good occasion to visit my old friends who went to school with me. We remind our school time memories and play game together.
Second, comfortable feelings come to me when I am in my hometown the reason that the enviroment here is very friendly. The air is absolutely cool and fresh so walking on the small paths under the big trees by the river is a great thing to me . I can also listen birsd singing, see the masses of the clouds floating across the blue sky and watch sunset going down behind the blogs of the trees from far horizon. In addition, the green of the fields along with the peace makes me be healthier than ever.
Returning to my hometownn is the only thing which is meaningful for me. One day I will come back here to live with my family, live among peaceful nature and to do what I love.
16 thg 10, 2009
Be yourself
Introduction
At primary shool, when Bill Clinton’s teacher asked him about his job he said to him that he wanted to be the president of the united states of America. His teacher and classmates laughed at him so much. They told him not to daydream. They said “you are stupid, a president. Finally, he became the OWNER of THE WHITE HOUSE. Bill Clinton has been successful for he has a firm belief in himself. So, you will achieve what you are expecting when you are yourself.
Body
Paragraph
To be yourself, you must have your own strong belief because the belief plays very important in your success.
First, never do you change your minds
Example: Einstein’s strange idea.
Second, you need to be patient to wait.
Example: jack canfield and mark victor handson
Conclusion
I believe that you will succeed if you are yourself. Beside, you are invariably proud of yourself and happy with yourself.
Introduction
At primary shool, when Bill Clinton’s teacher asked him about his job he said to him that he wanted to be the president of the united states of America. His teacher and classmates laughed at him so much. They told him not to daydream. They said “you are stupid, a president. Finally, he became the OWNER of THE WHITE HOUSE. Bill Clinton has been successful for he has a firm belief in himself. So, you will achieve what you are expecting when you are yourself.
Body
Paragraph
To be yourself, you must have your own strong belief because the belief plays very important in your success.
First, never do you change your minds
Example: Einstein’s strange idea.
Second, you need to be patient to wait.
Example: jack canfield and mark victor handson
Conclusion
I believe that you will succeed if you are yourself. Beside, you are invariably proud of yourself and happy with yourself.
15 thg 10, 2009
At primary school, Bill Clinton’s teacher asked about his future job, he said to the teacher that he wanted to become the president of the United States of American. His teacher and classmates laughed at him. They told him not to have daydream.” You are stupid, president”! But he did not care about what they had done. Finally, he is the Owner of the WHITE HOUSE, a very talented president. Bill Clinton has succeeded for he has a firm belief in himself. So, you will get what you are expecting when you are yourself.
FULL NAME:TRAN PHUONG NAM
CLASS:081202A
ID:08120021
FULL NAME:TRAN PHUONG NAM
CLASS:081202A
ID:08120021
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