23 thg 10, 2009

In Viet Nam, there are a lot of beautyful and famous places for tourist to visit like Da Lat, Ha Long Bay, Ha Tien, Vung Tau, etc...Most of them often get there on their holiday. They want to relax or release stress. However, returning to my hometown on my holidays is the most meaning thing for me.
First, coming back the hometown always makes me really happy. I meet every member in my family again. They usually welcome me with the smiles on their lips in a gleeful manner. The smiles do away with the tense feelings on me after my long journeys. We tell humorous stories for hours to one another for we are the persons fond of humor. I with my family enjoy the delicious meals that are made by my mother. The meals are very simple , but good and full of the love . I am able to eat my favorite chicken soup by my grandmother. Besides, I also have a good occasion to visit my old friends who went to school with me. We remind our school time memories and play game together.
Second, comfortable feelings come to me when I am in my hometown the reason that the enviroment here is very friendly. The air is absolutely cool and fresh so walking on the small paths under the big trees by the river is a great thing to me . I can also listen birsd singing, see the masses of the clouds floating across the blue sky and watch sunset going down behind the blogs of the trees from far horizon. In addition, the green of the fields along with the peace makes me be healthier than ever.
Returning to my hometownn is the only thing which is meaningful for me. One day I will come back here to live with my family, live among peaceful nature and to do what I love.

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