THE PATH to SCHOOL
In school time, I had any friends to go to shool with me, so I only got there on my own. However, I never felt lonely for nature along with me went to school. The scenery from house to shool was a very beautiful natural picture.
This picture was only lovely and lively in every early morning. Every morning, the sun was coming- the east horizon began to light up slowly I left home for school.I walked on the small path by the river. I paced under the blocks of large old willows whose shadow was against the river. The hair of the willows was slopping down and shaking in the wind. The cool wind currents hugged all over my body. So comfortabe a feeling seemed to be runnig through me. When to the bridge, I stopped on the top of it I let my eyes bend into down the river. The pure water currents, which made the thin masses moss move slightly,were flowing slowly and slowly. Sometimes, several dead leaves dropped down and the water lever was wavy. afterwards, I was in a hurry to continue my jouney. A vast green field was waiting me forward. Paddy sides were so bendy so I have to turn left and right many times. In fact, cutting across the field was a wonderful thing for me. I smelled the sweet fragrance of wild daisies blending in the fresh air of dawn. the yellow and white daisies with wild violet flowers were shaking as if they were waving at me. Yellow, white and colourful butterflies was dancing over flowers. Suddently, a breeze current blowed over they flied up into the waves of colour. Bees appeared busy searching for sweet honey. Now the sun went up abit high.The sunlight shined through the branches and leavs . the carpets of grass twinkled due to foggy drops stagnating on. Out of the field, I carried on my going on the red gravel road with the bloks of trees along. I was keen on listening to birds' voice without caring anything about. AS I looked up the sun rose up higher and I came to school.
That is a good time of myschool time, a memorable moment that I have ever had. I myself feel so happy. One day I will tell it to my friend. I think they also will love it as I have done it.
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