20 thg 11, 2009

Thesis statement:
Up to now, I still have not forgotten that memorable memory.
Paragraph:
Topic sentence:
My terrible memory came on a Saturday night of summer when my parents and younger brother went to my grandfather’s house.
Supporting sentence:
Closed the doors and windows
Lied in the hammock and watched television
Heard a weird sound from the garden
Thought about ghosts that my friends had told to me
My hair was standing up and a scary feeling was running all over me
Jumped into the bed without switching off the lights and television
Took the blanket and covered from the top to the feet
My body was shaking and sweat was so much
Lied and hoped my parents came back home sooner
When my parents returned I jumped out of the bed and shouted up happily
My parents were surprised.
I asked my father what that was the sound
That was owls’ voices

concluding sentence:
That is only one of my childhood memories, but I cannot forget it. To me, it seems to have occurred yesterday. And through it, I have not scared ghosts any longer.


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