HO CHI MINH CITY
As a young boy, I always cherished the ordinary wish that I would learn, work and living in Ho Chi Minh City one day. So I did my best to learn well so that I could enter a famous university there. And now, my desire comes true. After more than one year I have been living here, I see that Ho Chi Minh City is a good place for me as well as everyone to be.
The city provides convenient conditions for all people. First of all, about learning, you do not need to worry for there are a lot of universities and centers for you. You merely choose any of them that fit your ability. Most of the universities are very clean, large and comfortable. They bring learners the best learning environments. For example, classrooms have enough furniture like projectors, fans, lights, tables and etc... Classrooms are cool as well. If you are a sporty person you are able to play sports at any time you like. There are private sport yards like football, baseball, volleyball and so on. Moreover, if you want to get more extra degrees you can take courses in the centers. After class you can work part-time jobs to have your income for your daily activities. Second about traffic, roads are so large and smooth. They have pavements for pedestrians. Vehicles are very modern. They move currents to currents at the average speed. They almost only speed up on the motorways. Therefore, it is easy for your coming and going. You can go to school, work or someplace without being late by lots of different means such as buses, taxes, motorbikes, etc... However, going by bus is the most suitable for you because it is cheaper and safer than others. You only pay from three to five thousand dong for very far distance over thirty kilometers for each time. Buses run so early from five am to ten pm. Buses come to the station punctually. Finally, services are good. For instant, some kinds of service deliver goods to house. Many restaurants, hotels, motels and stores open both days and nights even weekend. While some persons suppose that Ho Chi Minh City is noisy and stuffy due to its crowded population and vehicles’ noise. Even though people cannot deny the advantage that the city gives them in a lot of aspects.
Ho Chi Minh City is an ideal place to live. After I graduate, I will be here to work and spend all my life. In the future, perhaps the city will develop more modernly. At that time, there will be people wanting to stay here.
28 thg 11, 2009
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